I'm liking this pen Chris

I don't think you have to worry about it being "mechanical enough" for the forum..... This forum is for all stuff made and modified (that's assuming I read the sticky topics correctly?)
Welcome to the MadModder.
This is a place for those who like to build, craft or modify anything and everything can gather. We are going to take our cues from the famous HMEM model engine site. I want this to be a place that fosters ideas and learning... plus a good place to show off your talents and skills.
Yep! Think I did!?
Build.... Check.
Crafted...... Check.
Talent.... Check.
Skills.... Check.
I think you certainly fill those criteria

Now.... About this pen.....
I'm liking the colours (Tortoise shell?) and IMHO it's the odd shapes that you produce that make it what it is..... Yours
I personaly love making odd shapes that I can't repeat exactly, it makes all sorts of one ofs
Please give us a better look at the build process of the next pen, success and failures are often posted.... It all helps to let people know it's not all as easy as some people make it look (just look at my Aeolipile thread..... I still can't make a sphere!!!
Question about some of the things you said....
1/ What does this "sac" look like?
2/ Can we see an exploded view of the pen?
3/ The engraving.... Is it to be inside that ring? When you say "notch" I'm looking for a flat or the likes within the round and I can't see it?
(If it's in the ring (groove) could a brass piece be put in there? I bet they could engrave that? it'd be like engraving a wedding ring etc!
Just a thought

All said, I'm impressed, on the product, (I'd never much thought about) top notch

and the nice shiny finish..... I like shiny

Ralph.